雅思零基础 小作文静态图—表格高分必备

雅思零基础 小作文静态图—表格高分必备

雅思数据图（线图，表格，饼图，柱图）除了线图是动态图之外–随着时间的会有不同的变化趋势（上升，下降，波动，不变），其他三种图可以静态，也可动态，也可静动结合。整体来说其实静态比动态要难写一点，雅思考试种表格和柱图出题频率也相对其他图形要高一些。静态图主要描述排序，比较，倍数关系

例如剑11test3雅思写作task1题目为动态图

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

下面我们要讲一下雅思静态图的写法，常用句型表达和写作思路。

上面我们刚讲过，静态图主要描述排序，比较，倍数关系，例如我们看下面这句话：

从人口的角度来说，中国排第一有14亿人口，印度第二13.8亿，美国第三3.5亿。

简单来说，我们可以写成：In terms of population, China takes the first place with 1.4 billion, India comes second with 1.38 billion, while the USA ranks third with 0.35 billion.

雅思写作想得高分，需要避免重复，例如描写排第一，我们可以写成

China takes the first place=China ranks first=China comes first.

但这只是从词汇方面避免了重复，如果我们想分数再高一些，我们可以写成

China has the largest population among all the countries in the world with 1.4 billion. India closely follows behind/takes the second placewith 1.38 billion, which is about four times as large as that of the USA (0.35 billion)—the third one.

与上面那个例子相比，这个句子表达上，排第一我们用了最高级largest number，排第二我们用了follow behind/take the second place, 排第三我们用了比较级+倍数关系+同位语，按照雅思评分标准，明显的是第二种表达得分更高一些。

当然雅思写作没有标准答案，我们也可以写成

With regard to population, China takes the first place among all the countries in the world with 1.4 billion, which is closely followed behind by that of India(1.38 billion). Third comes the USA with 0.35 billion.

静态排序常用短语，句型表达 高分必备

排序

一). 排第一(表格，饼图，柱形图)，最高级或比较级

1.A is/has the largest/smallest/longest…/ A is much larger than(that of) others among…

Eg: China has the largest population in the world with 1.4 billion.

The population of China is larger than that of other countries in the world with 1.4 billion.

2.A takes the first place/comes first/ranks first, with ….排第几

In terms of population, China takes the first place/ranks No.1/ comes first among all the countries in the world with 1.4 billion.

3.A outweighs/outnumbers/outtakes/surpasses/beats/leadsthe others超过

With regard to population, China outnumbers/leads/surpasses all the other countries in the World.

排第二）B takes the second place/spot

B follows behind/which is followed by with

B has the second largest/highest…

B is close/far second with just+数字

Eg: India takes the second place/India closely follows behind/India has the second largest population in the world, with 1.38 million.

排第三）Third comes C with only +数字

或者：C is close/far behind with +数字

或者：C takes third spot/place with +数字

Following Bcomes Cwith +数字

从。。。角度来说，就。。。而言

1.In terms of ..

2.As far as … is concerned,

3.With regard to…

4. When it comes to…

另外语法上我们还可以使用比较级和倍数关系使逻辑关系更清晰和语法更复杂。

描述差别不大时，有两种常用表达方式

一）There is no big difference in sth between A and B/among A, B and C.

Eg: There is no big difference in the population between China and India.

二）A, B and C have/share the similar figures in this aspect.

China and India share very similar figures in the population.

下面我们用上面我们所讲的内容，写一下这篇剑雅真题，

剑5test 4 p98页真题The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

首段改写题目give information about 我们可以改写为provides some data about, underground railway 我们可以改写为subway，并且把具体6个城市描述清楚。

The table provides some data about the subway systems in six different cities of the world, including London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles.

主体段从开放时间进行排序比较，另外排序时最大最小值需要重点强调，或者个别时候第二名也需要特别描述出来

In terms of opening time（从开发时间进行比较排序）,London has the oldest subway system （第一名最高级）among the six cities, which was opened in 1863. The underground of Paris follows behind, and it was opened 37 years later （第二名follow behind+比较级）in 1900. Tokyo, Washington DC and Kyoto opened their subway system in 1927,1976 and 1981 respectively（三个差别不大，可以合在一起略写）. The subway of Los Angles(2001) isnewer than the others（比较级排最后）.

主体段第二段

With regard to length（从长度进行比较和排序）, the subway of London takes the first place again/comes first again/ranks first again（排第一）,with 394 km, which is twice as long as that of Paris–the second one（定语从句+比较级+同位语）. There is no big difference/gap in that of Tokyo and Washington DC（差别不大）, with 155km and 126 km separately./ The subway of Tokyo and Washington DC share/have the similar figures in this respect/aspect, with 155 and 126 km respectively. The subway of Kyoto is the shortest one, with 11km, whose distanceis 17 kmshorter than that of Los Angles.(28km)最高级描述最后一名+比较级+定语从句

主体段第三段，从客流量进行比较和排序

As far as passengers per year are concerned, the underground of Tokyo outnumbers/leadsthe others（超过表排第一）, with 1927 million, which is far followed behind by that of Paris(1191 million) and London(775 million）前三个一组写. The subway of Washington DC ranks fourth, with 144 million, which is about three times as large as that of Kyoto(45 million) and Los Angles(50 million). 后三个一组，倍数关系

满分范文

The table provides some data about the subway systems in six different cities of the world, including London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles.

In terms of opening time, London has the oldest subway system among the six cities, which was opened in 1863. The underground of Paris follows behind, and it was opened 37 years later in 1900. Tokyo, Washington DC and Kyoto opened their subway system in 1927,1976 and 1981 respectively. The subway of Los Angles(2001) is newer than the others.

With regard to length, the subway of London takes the first place again/comes first again/ranks first again, with 394 km, which is twice as long as that of Paris–the second one. There is no big difference in that of Tokyo and Washington DC, with 155km and 126 km separately.The subway of Kyoto is the shortest one, with 11km, whose distance is 17 km shorter than that of Los Angles.(28km)

As far as passengers per year are concerned, the underground of Tokyo outnumbers/leads the others, with 1927 million, which is far followed behind by that of Paris(1191 million) and London(775 million）. The subway of Washington DC ranks fourth, with 144 million, which is about three times as large as that of Kyoto(45 million) and Los Angles(50 million)。

To sum up, London has the oldest and longest subway system among the 6 cities, but it is the underground of Tokyo that receives the largest number of passengers per year.